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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-02-22 04:01 PM


A wet sound
...like a swamp boiling

A sticky wheeze
...like fungi burning

A ghoulish growl
...like gravel crunching

A tired ache
...but the cigarette still satisfies


Yes, a match is as good as an engraved Zippo.
Smoke responsibly. Only YOU can prevent forest fires.


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-02-22 04:43 PM


You are so silly today, you make me smile.
~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-02-22 05:07 PM


I'm offended that you would laugh at my, "serious-as-a-heart-attack" poetry!

Were you standing or sitting when you were laughing?

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2018-02-23 05:45 AM


I was sitting in my fave chair drinking coffee, as is my routine. It is nice to wake up and have a smile. Thanks my friend.
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