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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2014-06-23 11:18 PM

Out of control… my impression.

Helpless to your smile without doubt,

yet… more entranced by your heart,

your song and verse.

Words to speak… my failing

None to rhyme in sugar sweet phrasing,

but when I find them,

my impression… out of control.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-06-24 11:19 AM

How unadorned and unabashedly romantic. I loved it.

Lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2014-06-24 02:53 PM

I hope it found you smiling.
Thank you for the great reply.
(Made me smile)....

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2014-06-24 04:03 PM

Hey there good to see you here JL.
This is so pure and passionate. No need for sweets or rhyme time.

Really nice reading, this is my kind of poetry.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2014-06-24 04:34 PM

"Helpless to your smile without doubt"

Yes JL it was the smile and the twinkle in his eyes that took me in.I understand. Good to see you here. Love this post.Jo Perry

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2014-06-24 04:45 PM

Hah! Been a long while, man, good to see you back. Loved this stunning bit of romantic directness!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2014-06-24 06:25 PM

Thanks, Blues!! There is always time for sweets and Rhyme...

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Thank you Jo! Glad you had the living experience.

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Thanks JP... nothing like out and out directness.
Good to be back too...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2014-06-25 01:40 PM

Lovely, JL.

Owl

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2014-06-25 05:10 PM

Thanks, Owl.

I do appreciate the reply.

JL

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2014-06-25 05:50 PM

Well ... good to see you JL! Not in here a bunch anymore, but not to see a number of the oldies but goodies still here when I make it in.

Enjoyed this. As said above in more than one way ... romantic!

jimmy

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2014-06-25 08:02 PM

Thank you, mister. Kind of you to reply.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

11 posted 2014-06-28 02:58 PM

Enjoyed, JL! Good to see you here.

Helen

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

12 posted 2014-06-28 10:46 PM

Thank you Helen.

JL

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

13 posted 2014-06-30 06:06 AM

Succinct, yet fully passionate.

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