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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Morning comes through the mist of waking realisation to devour the spirit. Like a wolf to the injured fawn; like the dawn executioner unyieldingly seeking the fruits of his trade. That ephemeral, yet peaceful, breath of evening comfort, stifled in a fist of fear, seeks refuge in a vaccuum of distorted thinking. And the heart won't cease its irregular, racing routine. Hours will ease the threat; soft words will soothe the senses; safe arms will calm the pulse. Belief, with deep-found courage, will again ride its warhorse to the relentless ranks of anxiety. Victory is light; fulfilment of the cause: 'I wish I could just feel normal.' Defeat is so utterly dark that its mere contemplation must never be an option. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
I've never suffered from anxiety, panic attacks, depression or any form of nervous illness. I have, however, close family members who do, and it is a terrible place to be. Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to read and comment on my posts. It is much appreciated. Long may this forum continue, it's a great place for inspiration. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Unfortunately, I have panic attacks, and it is a horrible place to be. Even though I understand what is happening I still firmly believe I've breathed my last breath. Again, I say, it is a horrible feeling. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Took me on a ride I am all too familiar with. Glad to know you don't suffer the same, but feel equally empathetic toward your family members that do. Reaching out to undertand them can make a world of difference. Too often people just think the suffering of a depressed person is a product of his own making, and own controlling. I assure you nothing could be further from the truth in most cases. Michael |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
That dreaded feeling like a tourniquet twisting tighter and tighter so I hear I have worked with patients who describe this anxiety as such well written |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nailed it, my friend...enjoyed. j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bless your heart. I'm glad I picked this poem first to read as I am fighting my way back once again. You being an understanding family member makes you a priceless comfort. Thank you so much for sharing this. Lori  |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
quote: oh...niiice...love the warhorse imagery..very powerful...and so very true of of our (sometimes) perverse human nature. Enjoyed this~*~ |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
It's a battle, Belle, it's a battle. |
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