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pagoda by blue river |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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adrift in dreaming blues the river streams by crimson hues last light trembles on the wings of the night heron's flight sheltered for a night in the open hut by the rising tide of time engulfed by dark water swirls calling calling calling I float away eyes open to the starry fields unblinking Ink runs from the corners of my mouth |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You painted such a beautiful serene scene and made it come alive!! Lovely poem wordancer... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a beautiful scene observing around you, yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely imagery. I feel as though I am there. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This was such a beautiful, soft-worded piece of writing to gaze at the first thing in the morning. I particularly liked . . . quote: ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine and colorful imagery indeed ! I am especially fond of: "...light trembles on the wings of the night heron's flight" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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