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Final Declaration |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Final Declaration The clunking of the plane's wheels releasing their hold on the ground, and folding up to hide behind wind-blocking plates of silvery, metal skin, was the final declaration at the end of the last thing you said. Goodbye. My soul stayed behind, with you A final clunk . . . and the clouds clutched me to the sky, a misty haze outside the window, hiding the world. You've stolen my soul . . . and I am so empty, without it. © wesley james beard, jr. august 2015 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your words convey emptiness and great despair. I, as so many, can absolutely relate. It is a pity that we can, Jimmy. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...james |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent Jimmy! Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent Jimmy! Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent Jimmy! Ida |
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