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Open Poetry #49

Walters date...

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2014-05-15 11:17 PM

We sit a world apart
Your eyes glimmer
Your beauty warms
My night becomes day.

I watch as you move
Grace and beauty
To feel but not see
It is enough to kiss.

We sit across the table
I reach out my hand
And offer you my soul
My words and deeds

It will end with a kiss
Red lips and a soft heart
It will end with a smile
A breeze and alone

Till the next time.

I aint as good as I once was but I'm as good, once, as I ever was. - Toby Keith

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-05-16 06:14 AM

Way to go Walter! What a wonderful way to keepsake a first date! I applaud you all the way around.

Lori

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2014-05-16 10:21 AM

sweetness shared by a poem

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

3 posted 2014-05-17 08:06 AM

'A breeze and alone' leaves a touch of sadness to an otherwise positive poem.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2014-05-31 09:32 PM

nice writing...reminds me of a date I had in Santa Monica in a quaint old German Restaurant a long time ago...James

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