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I Don't
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I Don't |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sometimes just talking to you tempts me to write... ...but I don't...I don't Because writing makes it real and it's not. It's just smoke and mirrors, a fantasy gone bad. In the light of day I can see this so clearly but comes the night and I'm wrapped up in that oh so bad fantasy... ...dreaming...wishing reaching for my pen to write... ...but I don't. You aren't worth my words, my tears, the pain that would bleed with each drop of ink. So I don't write I don't dream I don't measure each breath between your calls I don't...I really don't. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lots of raw emotion.. Great poem, really love it!! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Except for tonight. Still, this write isn't what you would love to write, those words of . . . quote: No, tonight's write is about you not penning him your passions and desires. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is a winner! You take the reader to the same painful places you don't want to go... Lori  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this Paula, although I am sure it pains you to write it. Jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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