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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2014-04-01 12:07 PM

A kiss on a block notes,
not to forget, that days
are kept by nights,
and nights by kisses.

un baiser sur un bloc
note, pour ne pas
oublier, que les jours
sont tenus par les
nuits, et les nuits par
les baisers.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-04-01 12:17 PM

Love the thoughts behind the kisses, Yawn, and the motivation and talent to write and post this for all to read.

~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2014-04-01 03:01 PM

Quelle belle façon de l'expliquer, Yann!

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2014-04-01 09:13 PM

days kept by nights
and nights by kisses ...

grand-fine lines indeed!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2014-04-03 10:31 PM

nice...James

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2014-04-04 06:36 AM

thanks Jerry for the kind comment, I am glad to know other people do the same,
yann

2islander2
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by the sea

7 posted 2014-04-04 06:37 AM

merci Diana pour le joli commentaire en français, c'est très gentil

yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2014-04-04 06:39 AM

thanks secondhandreamer, i don't know if the words work also in English, apparently it does, ut is very kind

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

9 posted 2014-04-04 06:42 AM

thanks loveabounds, i was trying to express the balance and necessity of the nights to bear the days, indeed, and the kisses do the same like an other tribute to night and days, my comment can't be as clear as the word in the poem , alas

thanks for reading and commenting

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

10 posted 2014-04-04 06:43 AM

thanks james

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