Open Poetry #49 |
Gratitude's Palette |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
GRATITUDE’S PALETTE 15 February 2014 Somewhere between emerald thank yous and nostalgic whens and sapphire sorries and ecstatic thens, she dipped her todays in the autumn shades of yesteryears and the spring colours of tomorrows and splashed the shapes and swirls and twirls and streaks and blends and story colours all over her eager sky. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This is a good'n, Owl. I was mesmerized by the awesome (hate that word, but it fits) wordplay involved in the poem, especially the "nostalgic whens," and all the rest and concluding with every good thing tossed heavenward to serve as her sky. Yes! ~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
A rainbow of wonderful Owl! Excellent use of colors! Lori Mizz Kitty gives "smug cat" regards to you and yours! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Jerry. I am glad you enjoyed it so much! Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Lori for your lovely response - and even more for Mizz Kitty's "smug cat" regards to me and Cleo-cat and Benji-dog! Cleo and Benji were thrilled to get them and Cleo send purry-meeow-purrrrs and Benji sends waggy-tail woofs to Mizz Kitty and Auntie Di sends lots of huggles and kissles to her too! Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
As always, a fine and 'colorful' penning! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A delight to read, Diana. Ida |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Your palette is a sensory delight |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Bruce, Ida and Emma. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice to read...james |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, James. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I like this very much thanks for sharing |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you very much, Olias. I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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