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Open Poetry #49

The First One

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-03-28 07:46 AM

we’ve all experienced it
that first kiss
let me modify that
the firstreal kiss
you know
the one that seems to last forever
is over way too soon
but you realize
the moment your lips meet
and a tongue darts into your mouth
you have set sail
on a wonderful journey
with a warm
sweetly-scented (if you’re a guy)
masculine, slightly sweaty (if you’re a gal)
intoxicating wind at your back

©March 12, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-28-2014 08:32 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-03-28 08:48 AM

Oh you think that's what a first kiss is like for a Gal? Kinda sweaty? Hmmmm. Mine was kinda heavy on Brute aftershave on the peach fuzz. LOL

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-03-28 08:55 AM

Sigh. Just trying for poetical something or other, Lori. Thank you for commenting.

~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2014-03-28 11:04 AM

Sigh. Just trying for the levity of my memories or whatever Jerry. Sorry I forgot to tell you I liked your poem just the way it is.

Lori

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