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KentAshbyKorb
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since 2013-05-05
Posts 99
Nc USA

0 posted 2014-03-19 03:00 PM



Spring
Herald
And sound your trumpet loud
Come, come
Exalt me
With budding blossoms
Awesome blossoms
Blooming fast
Between your bosoms
Wet lipped woman
Seeded womb
Give birth to all I love
Your flower
Lovely
Love me
Soft and tender
Make radiant showers pour
I surrender to your warm
And radiant
Pregnant form
May
all your fruit be born
For summers hours


"Striking thoughts make my mouth thunder as I brain storm."

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Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
1 posted 2015-09-28 12:07 PM


Delightful read friend.

Maybe it's just me, but I found my reading going faster and faster as I progressed through your lines of poetry. Read over it twice with the same experience.

It's been a blood moon night and perhaps more water and less coffee would have been a better idea.


88's friend.

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2015-09-28 10:48 PM


enjoyed reading this...james
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