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Open Poetry #49

A Beach Like No Other

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-03-14 01:42 AM

The sands
we once
walked on
keep falling
to the
bottom of
the vial

I reach
out each
time they
do and
turn it
over gently
...and smile

Touch, but don't look

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2014-03-14 03:25 AM

so lovely, we are tied with time in a poetical way, indeed,

thanks a lot

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-03-14 03:00 PM

The smile in the poem is contageous. clever concept.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-03-14 03:13 PM

This is a very good one, Jack.

~*~ Being captured is beside the point,
the point is not to surrender.-- Nazim Hikmet ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2014-03-24 10:33 PM

nice...James

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