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Oscar Bodeo
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Oscar Bodeo |
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KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
I had a fish named Oscar Bodeo He loved his feast of lizards We let him go In a crescent lake To live forever "Striking thoughts make my mouth thunder as I brain storm." |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Crafty and sly poetry. You did the only thing you could do Kent, and it was the humane thing at that. Reality man. That's what makes good poetry. For my two-bits, I'd like to read it again. Good 'ol Oscar...what will become of us? Touch, but don't look |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Okay, so here's another two-bits.  Touch, but don't look |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
***Drops another coin in the tray*** I still like this as well as the first time Kent. Touch, but don't look |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
***Drops yet another coin in the tray*** I still like this as well as the first time Kent. Touch, but don't look |
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KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
I agree with you! The power in the piece is that it is very real! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading this...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Simple and riveting . . . Liked very much the closing line . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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