JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-03-06
07:38 AM
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okay this I have understood poetry does not have to be all sweet smelling and flowery babbling brooks or snow white clouds against brilliant blue skies poetry can be cold and hungry hitchhiker on the road thumb out guns and roses (they were good for awhile) bills stacked up on the kitchen table ladies of the night displaying their wares poetry can be chewed, stubby pencils mean streets overdue bills, screaming babies the inner fire of a polished diamond smell of coffee perking most of all poetry can be whatever the scribe sees it as war, bloodshed rape carnage can be put to poetry dark poetry but poetry nonetheless
©February 27, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton
~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
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2014-03-06
08:23 AM
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Yeah! Tellin' it like it is again. heh heh
Lori
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-03-06
08:24 AM
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Good morning Lori, and thank you.~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~
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EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
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2014-03-06
08:55 AM
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it IS all that and a lot more, you got it !!
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-03-06
08:56 AM
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Good to see you this morning, Emma, and many thanks.~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~
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Jack Napes
Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb
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2014-03-06
12:23 PM
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A solid, comprehensive list alright Jerry.
Now I'd like to see the "more" that ER mentioned. I'm quite fond of lists.
Touch, but don't look
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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
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2014-03-06
02:42 PM
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uh huh 'xactly!Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-03-06
02:50 PM
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Thanks.~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~
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hunnie_girl
Member Elite
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
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2014-03-07
12:39 PM
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Couldn't have said it better myself. Great read
Krysti
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-03-07
07:20 AM
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Thank you very much Krysti .~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
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2014-03-08
06:00 PM
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Haven't written much lately because the poetry that rolls off my tongue is still quite dark, even though I have been in a far brighter place for some time... not sure if I'm afraid it will have the power to drag me back down, or if I'm truthfully just sick of it. If it is all poetry nonetheless, mayhap I will see what the muses are saying. Michael
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-03-08
06:05 PM
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Good to see you here, Michael. I went through what you are going through when I began to venture away from my own dark writes. I have pretty much figured it out now, although I still touch base with the dark every so often. You are a master of the dark, but I am happy you have been in a better place these days. You'll figure it out.~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~
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