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Open Poetry #49

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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-01-11 11:43 AM

Although we did,
We are condemned,
In the solitude of animals,
In the cold of the water and the snow.

So many mountains live in us,
Peaks and cracks,
We know nothing more
That what swans tell us.

We cannot climb
The light or deep paths,
STOP! The azure tells us,
Bend the head and go away.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-01-11 01:28 PM

A poem concerning the troubles of the world, and of man, something we all must learn to deal with or perish.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2017-01-11 02:57 PM

thanks Jerry, your words are meaningful and deep

have a good day
yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2017-01-11 08:27 PM

Deep thoughts, yann.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2017-01-12 04:36 PM

we know about that, yes Ida, thanks

yann

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