Open Poetry #49 |
shouts of children |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The shouts of the children Are the rivers of the world. It is necessary to follow them to find the misled sea, To know the peace Under its affected clothes. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A brave and necessary journey yann. Sails to full my friend. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks bluesy, i loved the formula have a good day yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I find the childrens shouts seem to get louder and louder as you grow 0lder...james |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
I always like your poems yann. Sometimes I feel like the "misled sea". One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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