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Open Poetry #49
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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2017-01-05 08:35 PM


The shouts of the children
Are the rivers of the world.

It is necessary to follow them
to find the misled sea,

To know the peace
Under its affected clothes.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-01-06 02:25 AM


A brave and necessary journey yann. Sails to full my friend.

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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by the sea
2 posted 2017-01-09 11:28 AM


thanks bluesy, i loved the formula


have a good day


yann

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2017-01-09 08:59 PM


I find the childrens shouts seem to get louder and louder as you grow 0lder...james
Boomer Styles
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South Side Of Success
4 posted 2017-01-10 03:46 AM


I always like your poems yann. Sometimes I feel like the "misled sea".

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

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