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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
When I think that the sun is a small star, When I think that there are black holes a billion times bigger than him, When I think that we are only in 26 000 years lights of a black hole, When I think that we turn around him in hundreds of thousands of km the hour, When I think that the light is gobbled up by them, When I think that there are white holes, wormholes, When I think that it fascinates exceptionally intelligent scientists, I mighty want to make love, with you my star. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Accepting the awesomeness of things that 'are' and being humbled by them, is key in understanding "self" my dear yann. You've excelled in your poetry the joy of it all as an umbrella for which to make love under. Magnifique! ...just bein' Bluesy |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot Bluesy, univers is only fascination indeed, and love is a way to respond to this fascination, so tiny are we, so difficult it is to entangle the mysteries of the "stars", even when they are feminine have a good day yann |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
I always like the way you think in your poetry yann. It's always so poetic. I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks dayofview, i try to get a punchline, a poetical idea rather than rhymes, I like the way "you" american people conceive poetry, free verse but close to heart and life, always touching people, thanks for the kind comment yann |
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