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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2016-12-06 07:03 PM

You, me and the constellations

You said I completed you
When loving you undid me

And like the constellations
Desire pulled me away
Until the land was unknown
And I became the stranger

Sometimes chosing between your wants
And life without you to love
Is unimaginable
And I'm left to watch the stars

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-12-06 07:46 PM

It has been a long time since you have graced us with your presence, Juju. Good to see you again, and you have picked up right where you left off. This is a poem which causes me to think and to understand why may of us can't be grateful with whom we come into intimate contact with. You always did write "thinkin" poems.

P.S.: I forgot to tell you, but these days there isn't very much traffic here. I, and a few more are trying to hang in. Maye you being back will create some activity.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-06-2016 09:50 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-12-07 01:36 PM

Eh . . . You are quite welcome.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2016-12-07 01:58 PM

Very cool poem, felt the yin and yang.

Really nice writing juju.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2016-12-07 05:17 PM

Love reading you again and seeing how much you have grown in thoughts and words.M

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2016-12-07 06:34 PM

Thank you for your kind words. I hope I haven't hurt your feelings JP

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2016-12-07 11:46 PM

very nice...james

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

7 posted 2016-12-10 11:25 AM

I think about air this way at times when I'm engulfed with it. I breathe it in, it stays awhile...and then it leaves me to repeat the process like perpetual karma.

Ari

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

8 posted 2016-12-10 11:38 AM

Opening your thoughts under the stars.
Such a wonderful arena to reflect our troubled hearts.

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