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Beneath a Starry Sky
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Beneath a Starry Sky |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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As we slept cozy and warm beneath our quilts, the frigid crept with her crystals across the prairie paradise. The night silently shivered as we dreamed in snug comfort. Creatures burrowed and curled up against the cold huddle together. Predators in winter coats hunt in frosty fields beneath a starry sky. A bit of moon slips across the blackness as it waits upon the sun to raise its rays of heat that will melt the frost away. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Now you've painted a beautiful picture Lori, with your carefully plotted words that I find greatly enjoyable! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I thank you kindly for your continued support! Apparently freezing my keester this morning was inspirational. ~L |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
One interesting thought I get from this piece is that we can be either, the huddler or the hunter... I'm more of a huddler  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm with you Rex! give me a warm blanket and I'll huddle and cuddle until the cows come home. ~L |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Since we're in a Big heatwave..thought I'd bring this one back up, it's a cool, refreshing, feel-good write. Always a fan.. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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