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Open Poetry #49

capitals for a girl

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2016-09-06 02:06 PM

New York never sleeps
But this girl either,
Paris has the Champs-Elysées,
But this girl is more beautiful,
Tokyo is shaken at night
But this girl even more,
She drives me more crazy than these cities,
When I want a kiss.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-09-06 04:25 PM

Sounds reasonable to me, Yann, if you wanna kiss find those lips which share the pleasure.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

2 posted 2016-09-08 01:32 AM

Moving to the 'burbs may stimulate those lovers' lips yann. No money down and 30 years to pay for that enticing smooch.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 2016-09-09 12:19 PM

Hey, that's pretty creative, comparing her to different cities...I like that idea! Well written.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

4 posted 2016-09-09 08:25 AM

Thanks Jerry, these lips exist for sure, i can dream

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

5 posted 2016-09-09 08:26 AM

thanks ari, feel sorry for your story, deconcerting for me
yann

2islander2
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by the sea

6 posted 2016-09-09 08:27 AM

thanks elizabeth

yann

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

7 posted 2016-09-10 03:57 PM

'How would you like to be, down by the Seine with me...' Kiss her in Paris. x

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2016-09-11 08:13 AM

Paris romantic city for americans, thanks for posting

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2016-11-01 11:19 PM

enjoyed reading this...james

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