Open Poetry #49 |
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The Ninth Day. |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
The Ninth Day. * * I walk in the company of strangers How grey the day, even a pale sun has denied me farewell My mother who placed little value on her faith My father who renounced my life for his own, Though I fear his days will be but small. Our noble queen has a spacious appetite for retribution ~ Oh my England, I truly did not desire thy crown Which was lent for but a few days Now I can do no more than to meet my death as such the high office demands of me Though I fear that my blood will be of little gain. The dark cloak of bigotry unfurls over our green and pleasant land * * 'Lord, into thy hands I commend my spirit.' * * * Authors’ note. The Execution of Lady Jane Grey February 12 1554, she was 16yrs old and ruled England for 9 short days. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This reads like she penned this last farewell. You did a magnificent job in giving her her due. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a very lovely tribute, verses are so pleasant , thanks yann |
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Great job getting into her mind! I love history poems. |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
There are four accounts of Jane’s’ last words though all I think should be taken with a large pinch of salt. Her sad fate was decided years before America was discovered in 1592 and all accounts were written well after her execution. My intention when writing this was to allow the reader to accompany Jane on her last walk rather than just write an account of her execution as I feel this engages a more emotional evolvement with the reader and, judging by you’re very kind comments, it seems to have worked. Thank you all for reading. Regards Cari. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
In 1492 Columbus sailed the ocean blue. You are a century adrift. She was sixteen years old, and there would have been no more sounds than the poor wretch losing control of her bladder. Nicely delivered poem though. |
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