Open Poetry #49 |
September |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Leftover summer surrenders to the cloak of early twilight Fingers of chill frost scar the Chestnut leaves with rust ~ Mushroom gatherers in early morning fields. Searching for nature’s free bounty While among the hedgerows Blackberries offer their choicest fruit just out of reach ~ The dormouse, fat from August pastures lifts a quivering snout to the north wind. Scuttles down the nest burrow and prepares for ‘The Sleeping Time’ ~ The song of summer is fading The intermezzo of autumn is in the air. and the lament of winter is waiting in the wings. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Loved your take on the three seasons, Cari, nice, very nice indeed. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful description of September. I love this time of year! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was like reading something out of Jane Austen's mind...loved the visuals this painted |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Great imagery Cari! Makes me want to grab a sweater. ~L |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
"To everything there is a season" and your fine poetry demonstrates this everso well Cari. Your absence has been noted and it's good to read your poetry again. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Enjoyed your write Poet.. "The intermezzo of autumn is in the air".. loved that line of my favorite season. rainyj |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Thanks guys for your kind comments, much appreciated. I don’t have the time now to write anything new, this poem was one that I wrote for a calendar which I even got paid for, Wow!! Cari. [This message has been edited by Cari (09-04-2016 03:41 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...james |
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