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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-08-31 02:36 AM




Leftover summer surrenders
to the cloak of early twilight
Fingers of chill frost scar
the Chestnut leaves with rust
~
Mushroom gatherers in early morning fields.
Searching for nature’s free bounty
While among the hedgerows Blackberries offer
their choicest fruit just out of reach
~
The dormouse, fat from August pastures
lifts a quivering snout to the north wind.
Scuttles down the nest burrow
and prepares for ‘The Sleeping Time’
~
The song of summer is fading
The intermezzo of autumn is in the air.
and the lament of winter
is waiting in the wings.

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-08-31 08:24 AM


Loved your take on the three seasons, Cari, nice, very nice indeed.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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2 posted 2016-08-31 10:55 AM


Beautiful description of September. I love this time of year!
LeeJ
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3 posted 2016-08-31 11:15 AM


this was like reading something out of Jane Austen's mind...loved the visuals this painted
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2016-08-31 11:44 AM


Great imagery Cari! Makes me want to grab a sweater. ~L
Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
5 posted 2016-09-01 12:53 PM


"To everything there is a season" and your fine poetry demonstrates this everso well Cari. Your absence has been noted and it's good to read your poetry again.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

rainyday
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Heartland USA
6 posted 2016-09-04 02:14 AM


Enjoyed your write Poet..
"The intermezzo of autumn is in the air"..
loved that line of my favorite season.

rainyj

Cari
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Englnand
7 posted 2016-09-04 02:19 PM


Thanks guys for your kind comments, much appreciated. I don’t have the time now to write anything new, this poem was one that I wrote for a calendar which I even got paid for, Wow!!

Cari.

[This message has been edited by Cari (09-04-2016 03:41 PM).]

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2016-09-27 11:56 PM


nice writing...james
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