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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2016-08-10 08:44 AM



I’m an old man
I’ve been used and
affected by time and extravagance
when I walk Zoe I walk slow
along the streets of Thibodaux
ahhh . . . but when I go inside The Hovel
the shuffle of my old age turns
to my poetry and finds
youth still inside my heart

©August 7, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2016 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Ari Squire
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1 posted 2016-08-10 02:00 PM


Not a single wasted word Jerry. This speaks for a good many here and everywhere. Your mind is always willing, even as your flesh is weakened. Youth IS wasted on the young. Keep your fire stoked pal, you've work to do yet before you rest.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2016-08-10 03:36 PM


Aye, old George Bernard Shaw was right in his thinking, about youth wasted. Thanks, Ari Shaw, for stopping by . . .

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DaysofView
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3 posted 2016-08-10 09:09 PM


Gramps used to say your old as you feel or young as you feel no matter how your feeling Jerrypat!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-08-10 09:25 PM


I am a firm believer in things "Gramps used to say," DV, and I absolutely concur with what was said here. Thank you.

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Marchmadness
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5 posted 2016-08-11 11:52 AM


I can relate Jerry.
                Ida

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2016-08-11 12:25 PM


Thanks Ida, yeah, I know I am not alone in this.

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RedStoneEB
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7 posted 2016-08-11 03:12 PM


we are only as old as we train ourselves to be

RS

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2016-08-11 03:34 PM


Yeah, you're right, RS. Also we are as old as others throughout our lives train us to be.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2016-08-11 06:04 PM


Well said! Good to hear you say that. ~L
JerryPat2
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10 posted 2016-08-11 06:24 PM


Thank you, Lori. Yes, poetry is my life these days.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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11 posted 2016-08-11 09:54 PM


very inspiring


yann

JerryPat2
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12 posted 2016-08-11 10:02 PM


Thanks Yann.

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Redstart
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13 posted 2016-08-13 02:23 PM


I don't know you but, trust me, I know how much writing means to you.
JerryPat2
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14 posted 2016-08-13 06:48 PM


I think you do, Redstart, and thanks for picking up on that part of me.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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