Open Poetry #49 |
Mean Streets Answer (for Lori) |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
oh boy this is a hard one it was true that the hate I lived with drew a certain kind of line in those days so I’m gritting my teeth attempting to put that young troubled man smack dab in today’s mean streets what kind of line would my hate have drawn? yes, back then I drew a line but it was a line I wasn’t even completely conscious of I just knew not to allow people to cross it the mean streets of today would be so different than they were back then but mean streets are mean streets you adjust to them or die if I were walking down them with the same deep rage as I had back then would I “bellow” about revolution? I am trying very hard to go there to put myself in the shoes of that angry young man in the mean streets of today it is hard to finesse still I would like to believe my rage and my political bent would be same as today here is the deal for two decades I never had a political thought didn’t have a computer where I could find people who thought the same as I the street people I came across did not have political conversations in other words I had not one political thought those days I had enough problems just staying alive you have given me a hard task, Lori but I can say I have always been conservative even if I didn’t know what it meant so! my rage as an angry young man would hate what America had become and I would fight to the end to stop the direction we are headed in revolution? if it came to that to put a stop to the madness because giving in to the madness is madness itself you gave me a very difficult subject to consider, Lori ©August 6, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-06-2016 03:50 PM).] |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
If a man can reply so quickly and so honestly...he's a man. Doubts? We all have. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for the great response! If you happen to mull it over further feel free to write more. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Thank you Redstart. Appreciate you kind thoughts. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I will mull it over, Lori, and I know how you would like for my mulling to come up with something different than I just gave you. It's possible . . . Maybe. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
no, not a different conclusion at all. You are the best person I know that can relate to some of the young people of today. In your day you didn't have the radical influences of today. Make sense? |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh my, Lori, thank you for the compliment, and you are so right, we didn't have the radical influences which are prevalent these days. I'll be mulling . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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