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Open Poetry #49

Sailing

Grouse
Junior Member
Posts 10

0 posted 2016-07-31 05:33 PM

Just testing with a previous post.

Sailing

Come bend a comma on the wind,
and in the pause
begin again
that passage youth once longed to make.
Tack!
Come about!
There are no ruts here on the lake.

Grouse .... Previously RMW

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

1 posted 2016-07-31 05:38 PM

There's many an elongated pause after a comma.

Grouse
Junior Member
Posts 10

2 posted 2016-07-31 05:44 PM

Redstart .... Thank you for taking a moment.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2016-08-10 12:14 PM

Cool, life is like that, a long slow sail...just riding the wind.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

4 posted 2016-08-11 03:14 PM

yep lets all ride the wind see where it bows us

RS

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2016-08-11 06:12 PM

good one! Love your first line. ~L

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