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Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

0 posted 2016-07-31 04:11 PM

He walked the low-sunned orchard
Through a wintered-shadowed maze
Trod the leafy, apple mulch
Imagined August days
Of Anna Marie and Ridgeway walks
And soft-skin, cotton miles
Of dancers' legs and lovers' grass
And apres-passion smles

He stepped the leafless, tangled aisles
That stretched the dormant trees
Held and apple-blossom kiss
That rode the memory breeze
He held a dreamer's, statue stare
As a dying sun lay down
Watched the sky entice the dusk
In a peach and turquoise gown

He fell so deep in Anne Marie
Yet held no ached despair
So gently touched those moments
As her scent engulfed the air
Oh, as those shadows merged to one
And brilliance fell to grey
Then fled those warming memories
That held the chill at bay.

[This message has been edited by Redstart (08-02-2016 08:05 AM).]

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

1 posted 2016-08-02 02:35 AM

So many good lines within a stellar theme Red, but these I found most attractive:

quote:
"Watched the sky entice the dusk
In a peach and turquoise gown"

Thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2016-08-02 07:40 AM

Beautiful! Ari picked one of my favorite lines too. Your imagery stirs all the senses!
~L

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-08-05 10:34 PM

very nice flow...james

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2016-08-19 05:10 PM

Enchanting comes to mind..i enjoyed every single word, especially that memory breeze..

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

5 posted 2016-08-22 11:38 AM

Memories make the bad times bearable and the good times better.....Thanks for sharing yours here

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

6 posted 2016-08-22 09:03 PM

Every line a killer, and man what imagery.

Excellent writing all the way around. Way to go!

HeliaHeart
Member

since 2008-11-16

Posts 53
Georgia

7 posted 2016-09-05 12:24 PM

Enchanting! Every line provokes a beautiful soulful imagery. ~Lia

"I kept always two books in my pocket, one to read, one to write in." - Robert Louis Stevenson

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