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2 ABC poems
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2 ABC poems |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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WEDDING RECEPTION ALfresco buffet candlelight dinner evening finale; guests' hunger intensify just kebab lamb musical notes overcome pangs quell rumbling stomachs temper unheard voices wine xcites yawning zlubs ------------------------------- PRACTISING ZEN Awakening bliss creates divine euphoria, forges grace, healing, inner joy; kindles light, merges nirvana, order, perfection; quiets restless soul transforms unknown visions within xpels yelling zealots @jjote 07/20/2016 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Liked both poems, but loved PRACTISING ZEN . . . Such a conglomeration of line after line leading up to the cool last line . . . Loved it ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks Jerry, it's always good to read your responses. Can't take off today on any writing, so thought of just having fun at word play |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
have to say, totally agree with Jerry....nicely done, gave me a lot of happy inside.... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice write, jjote. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
I rather like both. Alfresco dining under candles with some wine is just my cup of tea. And I'll keep my intuition and meditation for 'us'...I worship no gods. |
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