Open Poetry #49 |
on sundays |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
My mass on Sundays, it is the singing of lemons, that of the blue dove, the brook that trumpets, My homily on Sundays, it is the lake which sparkles, of one thousand silvery blades, an azuréenne sweetness. My mass on Sundays, it is the relaxed sea, the infinite morning sun, which recites its psalms. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What touching words, Yann. May you forever be blessed with Mass on Sundays. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Simply lovely. Skillfully crafted poetry Yann. A most pleasing Mass to attend to. More feelings and fewer words please |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful, nature at its finest.... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A beautiful experience, I'm sure. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Jerry for the appreciation yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
happy yo read your comment Ari, thanks yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks lee for the appreciation yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks ida for your kindness yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like a joyful experience indeed. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks james |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot ida, this is an experience poets really can have when they create a state of well being contemplation the nature while forgetting the insalubrity of the world , like a state of unconsciousness and isolation have a nice Sunday yann |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Mass on Sundays are not my thing, but we have a lot in common. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Absolutely glorious, Yann! I love it. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks redstart, good point for me yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks diana, gave a nice day yann |
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