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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2016-06-30 11:06 PM


My mass on Sundays,
it is the singing of lemons,
that of the blue dove,
the brook that trumpets,

My homily on Sundays,
it is the lake which sparkles,
of one thousand silvery blades,
an azuréenne sweetness.

My mass on Sundays,
it is the relaxed sea,
the infinite morning sun,
which recites its psalms.

© Copyright 2016 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-07-01 07:45 AM


What touching words, Yann. May you forever be blessed with Mass on Sundays.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
2 posted 2016-07-02 12:41 PM


Simply lovely. Skillfully crafted poetry Yann. A most pleasing Mass to attend to.

More feelings and fewer words please

LeeJ
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3 posted 2016-07-02 09:30 AM


beautiful, nature at its finest....

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2016-07-03 01:31 AM


A beautiful experience, I'm sure.

2islander2
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5 posted 2016-07-04 06:07 PM


thanks Jerry for the appreciation


yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2016-07-04 06:08 PM


happy yo read your comment Ari, thanks


yann



2islander2
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7 posted 2016-07-04 06:09 PM


thanks lee for the appreciation


yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2016-07-04 06:09 PM


thanks ida for your kindness

yann

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2016-07-05 10:09 PM


enjoyed...james
Marchmadness
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10 posted 2016-07-23 04:55 PM


Sounds like a joyful experience indeed.
                            Ida

2islander2
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11 posted 2016-07-23 11:04 PM


thanks james
2islander2
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12 posted 2016-07-23 11:08 PM


thanks a lot ida, this is an experience poets really can have when they create  a state of well being contemplation the nature while forgetting the insalubrity of the world , like a state of unconsciousness and isolation

have a nice Sunday


yann

Redstart
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13 posted 2016-07-31 07:02 PM


Mass on Sundays are not my thing, but we have a lot in common.
OwlSA
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14 posted 2016-08-01 01:01 PM


Absolutely glorious, Yann! I love it.
2islander2
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15 posted 2016-08-09 09:54 PM


thanks redstart, good point for me


yann

2islander2
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16 posted 2016-08-09 09:54 PM


thanks diana, gave a nice day


yann

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