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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
stilled... in the quietness of my heart you're always here beside me within me, etched into my mind are thoughts of us stilled... by the sound of your guitar strings being strummed by your beautiful calloused fingertips the song you sing is my own for you hold my key and I hold yours stilled... by the love in your eyes every time they meet mine the echos in your laughter the beauty in your touch your love surrounds me safely, comfortably... and I'm stilled by you |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . What a beautiful poem of pure love, DV. As I read your feeling it gave me a BIG smile . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Oh how the love tiger holds you tight and you are enjoying complete surrender to the enfolding embrace. Hope it lasts for you. Nice one. Cari. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully peaceful |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Lovely indeed. Each stands on its own as warm, sensitive poetry. More feelings and fewer words please |
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