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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2016-06-27 10:26 PM



Anyone Who's Ever Loved

After you lose someone
you really cared for,
and you will because most
relationships are of a
temporary nature,
you will be left
with a hole in your heart,
that will affect you
body, soul and spirit;
an emptiness, feelings of loss,
and pains of rejection,
so what can you do at that time
to recover from the pain,
don't think I know the answers
to restore your losses,
I have a hard enough time
dealing with my own,
but this I do know,
keep trying to do
the best you can
day by day,
and hopefully as time progresses
you will awaken one fine day
and realize your heart is healing,
and this positive progression
will re-energerize you to enjoy
a life of hopes and dreams...
this applies to all
who have ever loved.

JamesLee
6/27/16


  


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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
1 posted 2016-06-27 11:49 PM


Your very wise in your poem James! I really liked it alot!

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2016-06-28 09:43 AM


James,
They say it takes real courage to love again as if you've never been hurt. And that is the most important part of healing, to be willing to risk your heart again and again until you find the love that is right for you. When you do find it, it is worth the other heartache. ~L

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
3 posted 2016-07-14 12:43 PM


quote:
"hopefully as time progresses
you will awaken one fine day
and realize your heart is healing,
and this positive progression
will re-energerize you to enjoy
a life of hopes and dreams..."
Exactly James. Well said indeed.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2016-07-14 08:54 AM


the rejection part, is not actually rejection, but gain on your part...doesn't mean this person didn't love you, or care about you, it means, he or she were simply not compatible...and that's ok, b/c you want someone in your life, who thinks and feels like you do.  No two people ever think alike, however, it's nice to experience life, with someone who sort of parallels your universe.  
At least, that is what I've gotten out of your write.  

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

5 posted 2016-07-14 12:25 PM


I describe losing in love as a change from seeing in colour to black and white. Nothing is harder to deal with, but we do; we all have to. You describe the emotion with sadness and sense.
Constance
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 393
Ohio
6 posted 2016-07-14 04:52 PM


Much wisdom here for sure. I'm pretty sure you must have found yourself in that dark pl
ace and that you also must have found your way back into the light, to write it so well.

smiles,
cee

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
7 posted 2016-07-15 09:46 AM


so true james, losing love creates emptiness and van be a very tough experience


yann

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
8 posted 2016-07-19 12:11 PM


This write is one of your best, James.

Home run! Touchdown! Match! Goal! or maybe a hole-in-one.  Whatever, it's a great write.
Enjoyed, bud!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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