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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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If I possess a living soul Let it fill my life's frugal bowl: And mix elixirs' grand design, To give me peace before my time: Give me intellect to inspire, To always be one to admire, And if my breath will breathe for naught, 'Ere the cause of death; a love clot. ©April 13, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A "love clot". That's an original if I ever read one and the poetry is 'bedtime prayer' perfect. A "love clot". Could it also be that strange phenomenon that keeps things up when using that magic 'V' pill? "Love clot". You are amazing Jerry. More feelings and fewer words please |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nay to the "magic 'V' pill," Ari. Just the if's and and's and but's which live inside love's life. Thank you, my friend. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Great little poem Jerry and the that last line is brilliant. Enjoyed. pete |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Pete, your thoughts on my poem mean something special to me. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You never fail to move one. Jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I appreciate your thoughts and comments, Jo. Thank you. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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