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My Undeniable
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My Undeniable |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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she slipped into her suggestive but wore it like a demand my deliberate was swelling and her cling was sheer a scent unrelenting as desire's dew my undeniable covets her ©May 14, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-17-2016 07:53 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Some things never change you old rascal! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I know, and they never will, sweet Lori. Thanks for stopping by. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Can I suggest quite deliberately that that was unrelentingly, undeniably good. Well written, enjoyed muchly. Pete |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah.Hah Yes Pete, you are welcomed to say those things, and I appreciate the hell out of them. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Short and sharp at the point Jerry. I liked those first two lines in particular. You possess remarkable insights and relate them perfectly. "Street smart stuff", if you will. More feelings and fewer words please |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I sense something deeply lush in the subtle foreplay here, but since it's "your undeniable coveting her", why the title "her undeniable"? naughty, naughty Jerry |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Street smart stuff", if you will, Ari. I think most of my writing has a tinge of the mean streets, thank for being here. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh Naughty, naughty can be good, good jjote. You have a point with the name. Eh . . . What's in a name? . . . Many things perhaps. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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