Open Poetry #49 |
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Through the open Window |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
I turn from the plague of paperwork To look through the open window Sophie the sheepdog at rest Dreaming in the Hibiscus shadow The girls plaiting daisy chains ~ The play garden A makeshift swing hangs from the pear tree Grass, long, unworried by cutting blades Allowing wild flowers and weeds to flourish Given their freedom to exist ~ Mandy, a skipping, restless butterfly Seeking nectar from every experience A six year old torpedo Who can look through your eyes Into your very soul ~ Eager for an audience She lifts Sophie’s shaggy head Wags a finger for her attention And performs an Arabesque, rather poorly The old dog wags her tail in sleepy applause ~ Melanie, accepts the burden of maturity With the mantle of responsibility Resting on her eight year old shoulders Sighs a patient sigh And gathers the playtime litter ~ She hangs the daisy chains Low on the laurel bush Garlands for the night fairies They will be gone by morning You see, they always are ~ Hand in hand they run to the willow Hanging branches touching the leafy earth A tunnel leads to a secret place In the sun dappled darkness They giggle their secrets ~ Sunday bells pealing, heavy, in the evening haze The wall clock ticks its way to tea time Later, the bubble splashing bath Climbing the stairs to the comfort of cooling sheets Magic in the bedtime story to colour their dreams ~ Sleep my little ones But hold tight to each waking hour Treasure these precious years Before the thief of time Steals your innocence. * * Note. One of the first poems I wrote and posted on a poetry forum, boy was I nervous. But most of the replies were kind with the exception of one who told me this stuff was dead as the Dodo and I should move onto the modernist style of poetry writing. At the time I didn’t have a clue what he was on about. I do now. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Such lovely, excellent and vibrant discoveries within the scope of your feelings. Sophie and Melanie made me feel good. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
That person who replied may have said this stuff was as dead as the dodo... yet the daisy chains will still be gone in the morning. Gentle magic and memories to cherish flowed from your pen that day, well done. Thanks. pete |
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