Open Poetry #49 |
Hate |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hate. Insidious carcinogen to the soul. Abnormal and unhealthy cells of thinking bombard. Replicating undetected, prevails. Invading everyday annoyances into rages. Igniting reform into riots. Hardening our hearts to stone. LGR©5/15/16 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, you pretty much have given us the fine tuning of hate, Lori. It has always been around and it will always be among us. Not saying it is right, just saying it is a part of the human psyche for far too many. I, too, have been a hater here and there during my life. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
"Hate. Insidious carcinogen to the soul...", great words and very succinct, thanks for the read. Enjoyed. Pete |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
I don’t think I’ve truly hated anyone, disliked is about as near ass I’ve come. I have a good capacity for turning away so maybe that helps. If things get really out of hand then I can cope with that though I admit it has scared my wife. ‘Was that necessary’ she asked on a couple of occasions. Well I tried everything else, so yes. I’m pretty laid back I suppose but there is a line in the sand. There’s a very true saying i.e. Hatred corrodes. Cari. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow Lori this is an emotional poem. I think you've said it like it is. For as long as I can remember my mother drilled into me, that hate is a very VERY strong word. I can honestly say I don't think I've ever hated anyone..even the handful of people who have wronged me, mostly, I just want to make it right again. I guess I just don't have the energy or the time to let that particular emotion run rampant...I mean I will check myself everytime because I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to reel it in if it got away from me. Not a good way to live.. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very good Lori, I never said I hated any one.But I did say "I hate these shoes", or some other inanimate thing.At a strawberry festival I expected fresh strawberries and I mentioned too often how I was so disappointed and hated that they served frozen strawberries on bought sponge cups to serve them. I even bought a basket of strawberries made fresh biscuits and fresh cream whipped to prove my point and served her once we were home. She enjoyed and the tasted the difference, but I learned a lesson also and tried hard to change my words. jo |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks everybody for your kind words and input. I realize the word "hate" stirs the pot differently for each of us. For myself, this was a commentary on finding "corrosion" I wasn't taking care of to my own detriment. If we are lucky, as long as we live, we continue to learn...~L |
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