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AThief In The Night
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AThief In The Night |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
When I was just a lad of ten I worked all day and saved The dollar that I'd earned For a rainy day I kept it 'neath my pillow And swear this is the truth Woke up in the morning My dollar became a tooth. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this spin on the story, Toe!  I knew I should have used a bank To stash my salary! There are dentures 'neath my mattress Where my money used to be! |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Toerag - I know! I know! The Tooth Fairy needed that beer money. I love the creativity and unexpectedness of the story plus I had fun. Namyh |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
Awfully much fun, but not a very profitable inversion unless you need a tooth. Well done 'fer sure. More feelings and fewer words please |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A voice from the past beckons...always a pleasure to read you sir. Perhaps you've got a new business venture brewing here...put enough dollars under the pillow and you'll get a set of dentures! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! A good'un! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice Toerag...james |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Oh Deer Toe That's such a shame Have another go And you may get a brain |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You? Worked all day??? Now THAT'S funny! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like something that would happen to me. Ida |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So THAT is how you got that one tooth in your mouth!!!! |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Fun read, but who was the tooth donor and did you remember to say, "Fangs for that?" Enjoyed. Pete |
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booky1940! Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136Canada |
A dollar turns into a tooth! how funny? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
always fun to read you...enjoyed it much |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
thank you all so much for the kind replies |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
So good to see your name on this page again. loved the twist. best to you,.Jo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So good to see your humor on display again, Toerag. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Loved it! Made me smile... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Oh my...it's so good to see you and read you again...hugs.... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Cute! Reading this brightened up my day :-) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well Toe I'm flabergasted you're still around the same as I am every morning when I look in the mirror and wonder who that old man is wearing my clothes.........Speaking of teeth yours must be getting quite long these days. Hang in there! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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