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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-04-23 07:56 AM



Clair
*
*
A chair, a table
Dry-eyed despair
Loneliness, almost tangible

From a photograph
She smiles at me
Through remembered eyes
~
Youth in a forgotten summer
Captured elegance in a white dress
Long before my heart beat
~
Life reduced to whimsy
Tranquillity in lazy humour
Her armour against adversity

Beauty worn with carelessness
Demanding attention
You blessed our world
~
Memories jostle for recognition
Bedtime fairyland, a feather kiss
To banish childhood fears
~
You left in the summer
Before the winter of age
Stole your loveliness
~
The padre, whose
Stumbling words
Announced your passing
~
We never said goodbye
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The second poem I wrote on the early death of my mother.


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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
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1 posted 2016-04-23 02:14 PM


A beautiful tribute this is.

Michael

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
2 posted 2016-04-24 01:22 AM


Very tender and loving poetry from a good son.
quote:
You left in the summer
Before the winter of age
Stole your loveliness
Stunning to the marrow.

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
3 posted 2016-04-24 05:35 PM


Sometimes, our reciprocation of a mother's love comes too late. I trust your mother always knew of your love for her, as all who read your endearing poetry now do.  

More feelings and fewer words please

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2016-04-25 09:48 PM


very nice...james
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
5 posted 2016-04-25 10:00 PM


Very nice, Cari. Wish my own mother could elicit such wonderful sentiments . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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