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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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how could I forget Virginia or Dallas, Texas or Jimmy and Virginia's sister I've forgotten her name Virginia had (real) blond hair Jimmy and her sister lived together they set me up with a blind date with Virginia the four of us went dancing Virginia and I melded into each other's arms on that dance floor some hope-to-hit-it-big country band was kicking ass had us clinging to each other oblivious to everyone else by the time Virginia and I made it to my apartment we had groped each other senseless on that dance floor Jimmy and her sister were long gone we were on the sofa having a nightcap and sucking each other's tongues after awhile I said, how about let's go into the bedroom? she said, "You'll have to pick me up and carry me." I said, huh? she said it again so what's a guy to do in a situation like that right I stood, gathered her into my arms and we played house the rest of the night Virginia and I were an item after that she was a good person dy-na-mite in bed we'd probably still be together except for that terrible, terrible night when her eight-year-old daughter came into the room where we were and said I'LL CALL THE POLICE! ©March 8, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
haha, romantic interlude aborted? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ending line was "perfect!" And much better than "wait until I tell Daddy!!". enjoyed, my friend! j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, she thought I was hurting her mother, jjolte. . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, thank you very much, Jimmy. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-27-2016 09:19 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry jjote, but you are correct, our "romantic interlude" was absolutely cut short. Happy Easter if you observe it,if you do not, Happy Sunday!. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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