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The Poet in Her
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The Poet in Her |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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she flows with passion for the written words in her poems when she is excited and happy her verses celebrate, sometimes even berate as only she can reading her lines you understand they are as pure as a cool jazz note from sax or flute hers is an ancient wisdom and it is under complete control over the years I’ve been a fortunate reader of her style and have learned from it she is a true poet her verses can be dark very dark what was I thinking kind of dark and can be girlish to the extreme and those titles which fall in between are but life lived hurts borne secrets unearthed a deep thinker and a lover of being n’er to ask what she herself will not give ©February 23, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-23-2014 12:39 PM).] |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A warm dedication sure to please. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you. ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
For Moi? I will be so presumptious as to say thank you!!! I am other wise speechless. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes. You are welcome. ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bless your sweet heart Jerry.  Lori  |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
I don't want to crash anything, only to say that I felt the poem was very good. I can see by the replies that it was very well received. Good luck you two! Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What made you think you were crashing things, Jack? Thank you for your comment. ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
I don't know for sure JerryPat2. It was kinda like walking in on your parents on a Sunday morning. Having read the poem, it just sorta felt that way. I think I'm embarrassing myself and feeling a little foolish. No offense intended. Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
However you feel I can't help. You parent response was bizarre to say the least. This poem is about a lady who writes poetry, not a sexual romp, man. ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Please don't get me wrong. I didn't want to imply anything in a mean-spirited or suggestive way. Bad choice of humor on my part as I'm only now getting familiar. I'll try to think a little faster than I type next time. My apologies. Jack Touch, but don't look |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
No biggie, Jack. ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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