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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-02-27 07:35 AM



Love Song


Such a long time

To get to know you

My clumsy advances

Spurned, rejected

Fool that I was

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Slowly you surrendered

To rough untutored hands

Tracing the love lines

Down, down

In sensual wandering

~

Lustful fingers

Searching

Seeking the key

To unlock the secret

Of elusive passion

~

In my arms

I draw your warm belly

Close to me

Touching the strings of your heart

I discover your sweet intimacy

~

We are as one

Joined in erotic union

Together at last

We play the old slow tunes of Spain

While ‘My guitar gently weeps’
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This poem is about my guitar
Hands up all those who thought this was a naughty piece



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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-02-27 11:25 AM


Of course I thought was a nasty poem, but then my mind stays in the gutter pretty much.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2016-02-28 04:54 PM


I have mine up, but like the poem either way..

Clean or dirty, hand 'em to me.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2016-02-29 07:38 PM


play away...james
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