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Surrender |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
I joined the dance of love Changing partners With a smile and bow For the privilege Then. Oh bewitching witch Invading sleepless nights Tiptoeing through so many daydreams Scheherazade taught you well ~ Thistledown kisses, light with promise Rhythm fingertips re-stitching desire Surrender to beloved infection Prisoner in enfolding arms ~ Camellia scented Surrey sunset Soft the breeze that stirs your hair We lift our eyes to the rose pearl heavens Blessed by chance and the evening star * * * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Such beauty within your words, Cari. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Blessed by chance, as fate would have it. I often wonder about the turn of events in life, and the path we find ourselves on. I really enjoy your writing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...james |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Should have kept dancing and never stopped....smile.... Interesting and intense writing. Vivid disclosures. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful, Cari. Ida |
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