Open Poetry #49 |
Twilight. |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
She sits, unmoving on a cane backed chair Vacant eyed, deaf to the blackbirds song The dress that once hung in a Paris fashion house Hand stitched seams collapsed on shrunken flesh Age spots polka dot the yellowing skin Eyelids flutter The mind reels turn Playing stuttering shards of memory ~ A Devon tea shop Middle class chatter Tinkling cups sing to a baroque tune As she lingers over the cake menu ~ An impatient serenade of car horns Invade the open window Surrender to a spaniel eyed lover Early union on a Neapolitan morning ~ The B17 low, too low Shattered wings trailing aluminium banners Inch high over the slate tiled roofs As somewhere a radio plays Glen Millar ~ The clutching hand of disease Finds the cogs of the mind The screen flickers, fades No credits are running * * * A poem on Alzheimer’s disease. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You cut right to the chase here, Cari. I think you probably caught the ambiance quite clearly. We will never know, however, because to my knowledge no one with Alzheimer’s has ever come back to relate how exactly it affected them mentally. Still . . . I believe your description is pretty much right on. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, good job Cari. I agree with Jerry. Alive but not alive, very sad. Well written piece with lots of appropriate word pictures to bring the whole thing home to those still aware. Enjoyed the read. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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