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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-02-13 04:08 PM



She sits, unmoving on a cane backed chair
Vacant eyed, deaf to the blackbirds song
The dress that once hung in a Paris fashion house
Hand stitched seams collapsed on shrunken flesh

Age spots polka dot the yellowing skin
Eyelids flutter
The mind reels turn
Playing stuttering shards of memory
~
A Devon tea shop
Middle class chatter
Tinkling cups sing to a baroque tune
As she lingers over the cake menu
~
An impatient serenade of car horns
Invade the open window
Surrender to a spaniel eyed lover
Early union on a Neapolitan morning
~
The B17 low, too low
Shattered wings trailing aluminium banners
Inch high over the slate tiled roofs
As somewhere a radio plays Glen Millar
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The clutching hand of disease
Finds the cogs of the mind
The screen flickers, fades
No credits are running
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A poem on Alzheimer’s disease.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-02-13 04:39 PM


You cut right to the chase here, Cari. I think you probably caught the ambiance quite clearly. We will never know, however, because to my knowledge no one with Alzheimer’s has ever come back to relate how exactly it affected them mentally. Still . . . I believe your description is pretty much right on.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2016-02-13 05:42 PM


Yes, good job Cari.
I agree with Jerry.

Alive but not alive, very sad.
Well written piece with lots of appropriate word pictures to bring the whole thing home to those still aware.

Enjoyed the read.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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