Open Poetry #49 |
The Oak |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
The iron shod hoof fell Pressing me down into the bosom of life I spread my timid roots, With growing confidence deeper, deeper Feeding in the soup of English earth Drawing strength from my fragile veins To break from this armoured shell ~ Pushing aside the dried leaves of winter Out to the shy welcome of an April sun I took my first breath Nature blessed my infant summer Through my fledgling leaves I drank the cocktail of resin scented rain Stronger now Reaching upward for the blue spangled sky ~ The rich on horse, the poor on foot Sheltered neath my spreading canopy Wandering tinkers, ragged charlatans With trinkets, ribbons, charms for true love Religious relics and cheap tin pots And in return for board and lodging Birds with tales of far off lands ~ My brothers felled for duty Lent their bodies to England’s wooden walls Braced salt taunt sails of regal clippers Chased the trade winds down to Rio town Sweeping the raw and restless oceans Commerce, war, and thieving plunder Homeward bound with Spanish gold ~ Long dead lovers promised fealty In the sanctuary at my feet Carving hearts with piecing arrows a naive promise of undying love And so the weary years ringed my body Centuries passing in the march of time ~ Now I am marked for death The red cross fresh on my cankered trunk Soon the cutting tearing chain saw Its ripping teeth will end my days A last acorn loosens, falls Good fortune my little one Luck and life be with you, Grow strong * * * * Note: 'England’s wooden walls' refers ships of the English navy which were built of oak. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A bit of history, explained in the best poetic manner.. I can see the ships oaken sides, chinked with oakite, and pitch..tight as a barrel. I also feel the spirit of the tree, wondering what happened to its former life.. Excellent poem for a seeker of visions. Thank you for it. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A historical expression in a fine poetic layout. The note at the end was excellent as it brought it all together. I guess the Oak is the strongest wood for those fierce battles that were fought side by side. Also for all these other uses write about.... My brothers felled for duty Lent their bodies to England’s wooden walls Braced salt taunt sails of regal clippers Chased the trade winds down to Rio town Sweeping the raw and restless oceans Commerce, war, and thieving plunder Homeward bound with Spanish gold" Wow! Some of those battles must have been wild. I like those types of poems that give inanimate things, although living, a human perspective of the world around them. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice descriptive writing...james |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your poetry is so full of good stuff! I just marvel at how you cram pack so much into your work! The historical edge is the icing on the cake. Your imagery is always unique. Very well done! ~L |
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