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MissMarti
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Posts 87
USA

0 posted 2016-02-06 12:39 PM

Photo Courtesy of S. Kimball

booky1940!
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since 2009-04-16

Posts 136
Canada

1 posted 2016-02-06 04:24 PM

That's a real beauty to look at!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2016-02-06 05:36 PM

Absolutely awesome, dear Marti! Keep them coming!

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

MissMarti
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Posts 87
USA

3 posted 2016-02-06 07:45 PM

Books, thank you so much for dropping by to read my haiku!

MissMarti

"Faith is taking the first step
Even when you don't see the whole staircase."
MLK

MissMarti
Member
Posts 87
USA

4 posted 2016-02-06 07:48 PM

Margarita, thanks dear lady. I am not thrilled with the 3rd line; I think the wording is awkward. My mind suddenly went blank!! Any suggestions?

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2016-02-07 07:36 AM

Dear Marti, the intention of your third line is just perfect. I understand your doubts about the wording. If you used "lighting" there would have been one more syllable. Maybe one could say "lambent light to Spring", using an adjective and a noun instead of the verb. But it is really a beautiful thought expressed in your haiku, dear Marti.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2016-02-07 11:35 AM

Awesome!

j.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2016-02-07 12:32 PM

Beautiful photo and your words express it perfectly.

true love never looks after it's own interests

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

8 posted 2016-02-07 12:37 PM

Cool picture!

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2016-02-07 04:20 PM

Love it!.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2016-02-07 08:35 PM

WOW! Beautiful write and picture, excellent!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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