Open Poetry #49 |
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The Heart Of Celtic Music |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada ![]() |
Along the eastern seacoast Lining the rocky shore Lie the fossils of forgotten life Still serving up their chores The gray and misty network Of water cycle needs Rise upon the grasping air Like fog within a dream. The pungent smell of seaweed Announces the grand source Where mystic depth delivers Lost chords within the roar. The lonley call of sea birds Carving artistry on wing Are fed from nature's plenty Where winds of promise sing. Fear not those mighty waves Kissed by the pearl of moon This is an ode to sustenance In the heart of Celtic Tunes. The anthem of the great sea Baring souls beyond compare Whispering to all lovers Like an answer to a prayer. And when the evening comes The stars fill up the sky Tranquility brings restful peace While waves of thunder hide. Quiet fills the salty air Reflections warmly glow Where long hugs breast to breast Are better than pure gold. A rising breeze goes sifting Above the seaside fire Reminding minstrels time is late And brings up life's requires Back home until another day When the ocean roar runs high Blowing songs of new daylight In the key of Celtic life. This poem is in reference to inspiration for Celtic music played in the north eastern part of the Province of Nova Scotia Canada. The Gaelic Culture of Sydney Nova Scotia is as Celtic as You Will Get! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent poem-love Celtic music.. One of my favorite Celtic singers is Loreena Mckennitt..no matter if she is playing the Celtic harp, or singing poems, in a celtic manner ..The Highwayman, By Alfred Noyes, and Tennysons "Lady of Shalott" Two of my favorites that come to mind. Thanks for the read |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Ice, comment much appreciated. I have always loved Noyes, "The Highwayman", love the old style. Some today say that style is pretentious but really it's such a classic. Honestly I don't know that much about poetry I'm just an old song writer having fun with the words. Sad ending to "The Highwayman" but the vivid imagery holds the reader, even knowing what the outcome is going to be. I must look up the other two you mention. Have a great day. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I know not much into Celtic music, so I cannot give a detailed comment. I do, however, know of music that will set your feet to becoming restless and the dance is on. I have a feeling Celtic music is good in that way! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-05-2016 10:33 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I love Celtic music and my Celtic soul loves this poem. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks for dropping in Jerry. Yes, the type of Celtic music I'm thinking of has a lot of toe tapping foot stomping swing to it. I'm a fan of all types of music, well maybe not some Rap that has disgusting lyrics, but for the most part I appreciate the artistic expression. Even had Pavarotti bring a tear to my eye and I didn't understand a word he was singing. Just the way of it for me. Take care. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you for those kind words Ida and thanks for your comment on Celtic. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Miss you music man...you make everything sing |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
Hi, what a fabulous piece of writing. I truly enjoyed reading it, both times! "Faith is taking the first step |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Now this sounds great to my ear, dear Eric. Just outstandingly beautiful! I love celtic music, have a few cd's and use them also for meditation. Wonderful work! Love, Margherita "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." (Rumi) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula long time no communicate. Thanks for the encouraging reply. Good to hear from you. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marti, thanks for the fabulous word and the two time read! I appreciate your visit. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Margherita Thanks for the full quote, much appreciated. It is a fascinating type of music which really has thousands of years of history. Glad you enjoyed this and once again thanks for the kind words true love never looks after it's own interests |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Typical ethome, to me - and definitely the excellence I've come to expect when reading you - enjoyed. j. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you very much JW I appreciate your kindness. Thanks for reading and commenting on this piece. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love Celtic music! Nothing else quite hits the spot in the soul like it does. Enjoyed your poem very much and the images it brought to mind. ~L |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Lori, nice to hear from you. Thanks for the read and comment. Yeah Celtic music is great, and can be quite mystic sometimes. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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quatro04 Junior Member Posts 12 |
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, especially the first part. I can almost see myself walking along the sea. Nicely done...thank you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Quatro for the visit and the comment. Glad you could associate a presence with the ocean from the first part. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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