New Beginnings - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #49

New Beginnings

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2016-01-29 11:42 AM

   New Beginnings

On this Winter night
of resplendent wonder
beneath a vast-eternal
sky of floating clouds
and weightless dreams,
as somewhere far away
in the dancing moonlit
  shadows,
the ancient spirit-wind
seems to sing some
long forgotten Celtic tune
of life and loss and love ...
I have simply come to ask
  the universe
by what perfect magic words,
beyond all past and future
misty shores of life's
cascading sorrows,
may I bridge the space
between our hearts.

                 --- b. e. adams (1/28/201)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2016-01-29 06:34 PM

Bridging the space...says it all.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2016-01-29 09:13 PM

Thanks again, "Blues!" ... for commenting on this ever-so-humble lil' "word painting!"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2016-01-30 04:23 PM

Dear Bruce, your words are so perfectly beautiful that I just have to sigh ...

The bridge is made of love and can't be destroyed, as long as through the longing you establish the contact. Universe knows a Poet's heart!

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2016-01-30 06:27 PM

thanks, Margherita !

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.