Paradox (Inspired By JerryPat's "I Am, We Are")

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Open Poetry #49

Paradox (Inspired By JerryPat's "I Am, We Are")

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2016-01-28 10:01 PM

time seems to measure
what can never be again
against all that is

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

[This message has been edited by Ticklefingers (01-28-2016 10:42 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-01-28 10:19 PM

Ah, you come up with the coolest list 5-7-5's, This one is no different. Last line, of course! . . . Pladacerous? Shrimp? I'm stumped and I am loaded . . . Goodnight! . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

2 posted 2016-01-29 01:52 AM

My memory works that way sometimes TF and Jerrypat! Good poem though.

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2016-01-30 05:26 PM

Cute, Danny! My opinion:

***

Detachment from past:

Let not sad events haunt you

Cherish what is now

***

Margherita

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