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Open Poetry #49

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2016-01-25 06:32 AM

Slumber rumbles between us
in our blissful oblivion.
Our previous entanglement
straightened into spoons.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-01-25 08:17 AM

Ah sha, you sure know how to make every word count . . . Amazing . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2016-01-25 02:33 PM

Thanks Jerry, what a nice thing to say! ~L

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2016-02-04 07:49 PM

Very well put, my friend - spoons indeed!

j.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2016-02-04 09:08 PM

Hi Lori
Haven't read your work for a long time. I like this and I get the picture. Nice work!

true love never looks after it's own interests

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2016-02-04 09:59 PM

Good one.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2016-02-04 10:11 PM

Nice writing, Lori. "blissful oblivion"
Hoping those spoons are solid silver.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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