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Walk with me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Put your hand upon my shoulder as lightly as a feather. So I will know you are close caring tenderly. With every step I take I will be able to hear your song of love and I will hum along. I will trust the direction my feet will take and more so I will trust my soul who guides me while I climb higher into the spheres of light where everything is all right. Where love reigns, where tears are dried, where I am truly One with divine creation, where I allow the universal flow of love to fill me and to comfort me in all of my human suffering. Keep your hand upon my shoulder as lightly as a feather, my Angel, my Love, my Everything. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A beautiful poem from a beautiful heart. Nice poem for me to read this morning. Thank you, Margherita. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh boy, Margherita, you give the reader much to decipher. While this could be spiritual in nature, it could also be as one with the now and the one who puts a hand on your shoulder could actually be walking beside you. I loved this, whichever way you felt in your heart when you penned it. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Margherita, the poem has two major directions, the trust and the sweetness, it creates a great sensation have a nice day yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I enjoyed your kind comments, dear Poet friends. Thank you so much! Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing from a dear heart...james |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you kindly, dear James, for your loving comment. Margherita |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita - Faith held together by the glue of Belief is what it speaks to me and I loved it. You did real good M. Namyh, a fan. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh you make me reach for the stars and cling to my loved ones who have gone before me. I believe with my whole heart there is a heaven. Thanks for sharing the beauty sweet one. |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
This brought buckets of tears as yesterday our dear friend died of cancer. His wife is devastated along with all of his family and friends. Even though it was a blessing that he suffers no more, it is so damn hard to lose a friend. Thank you for these words as they brought comfort despite my tears! Hugs sweet lady, Marti "Faith is taking the first step |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Very lovely indeed Miss Margherita. Within it all, I found this particularly attractive: quote: 88's friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, my dear Poet friends, Lori, Namyh, MissMarti and Danny, for your most kind and loving comments, which I highly appreciate. I am sorry for your loss of a dear friend, dear MissMarti. Comfort comes when the bond of love survives physical separation. We really can feel the presence of our loved ones who have gone Home. Hugs. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Only you could write this Margherita. Ida |
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