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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

0 posted 2015-12-28 05:05 AM

Trees in their white dress

softly hum to winter's tune

filling hearts with peace

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-12-28 06:13 AM

Dear Margherita,
I love this! Peaceful is the word for snow scenes. I'm still waiting on our big snowfall to arrive. ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-12-28 09:02 AM

A picture is worth a thousands words so they say, but this picture, combined with 5-7-5 is superb!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2015-12-28 04:47 PM

under the white mantle
below the guild of ice
roots are asleep
dreaming of April.

Your poem is inspiring..:-)
But
we must give winter the justice of being..
your little Haiku does just that.

[This message has been edited by ice (12-28-2015 06:37 PM).]

rainyday
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Posts 304
Heartland USA

4 posted 2015-12-30 09:38 PM

M, Very pretty, and yes..peaceful.
I've a snowy scene in my neck of the woods
right now.

Enjoyed your Haiku
rainy

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2015-12-30 10:52 PM

fine poetic as well as photo imagery !

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2015-12-30 11:25 PM

wow, love your writing and snowy pictures...its beginning to look a lot like Christmas...james

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

7 posted 2015-12-30 11:51 PM

That is pretty but I don't feel very lovey dovey when I'm cold. Nice poem too!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2016-01-03 12:47 PM

Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for stopping by and commenting so kindly. I much enjoyed your replies.

MissMarti
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Posts 87
USA

9 posted 2016-01-04 05:50 PM

Love this! As off yet we have no snow. Very unusual for NH.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2016-01-04 11:12 PM

Wonderful! My friend . . .

j.

Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana

11 posted 2016-01-05 12:12 PM

"Trees in their white dress" is stunning to imagine. It was once a reality for me Margherita, but a scene like this one in your image is likely to be viewed only in pictures now.

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

12 posted 2016-01-05 02:52 PM

Margherita, You put words together so beautifully. That picture is a perfection but you are the one that opens it up to all. Love to you, JO

Margherita
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13 posted 2016-01-06 03:29 PM

Thank you, Miss Marti, Jimmy, Danny and Martyjo, for your kind replies. I enjoyed your visit here.

Love and peace.
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2016-01-07 04:48 PM

The beauty of your poetry never fails and continues to inspire.

Just beautiful, you.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2016-01-09 02:44 PM

Thank you so much for your highly appreciated visit and comment, dear Lori!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

16 posted 2016-02-24 05:02 AM

So pretty.
Ida

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