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Margherita
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0 posted 2015-12-28 05:05 AM





Trees in their white dress

softly hum to winter's tune

filling hearts with peace

© Copyright 2015 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2015-12-28 06:13 AM


Dear Margherita,
I love this! Peaceful is the word for snow scenes. I'm still waiting on our big snowfall to arrive. ~L

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-12-28 09:02 AM


A picture is worth a thousands words so they say, but this picture, combined with 5-7-5 is superb!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

ice
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3 posted 2015-12-28 04:47 PM


under the white mantle
below the guild of ice
roots are asleep
dreaming of April.

Your poem is inspiring..:-)
But
we must give winter the justice of being..
your little Haiku does just that.

[This message has been edited by ice (12-28-2015 06:37 PM).]

rainyday
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Heartland USA
4 posted 2015-12-30 09:38 PM


M, Very pretty, and yes..peaceful.
I've a snowy scene in my neck of the woods
right now.

Enjoyed your Haiku
rainy

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2015-12-30 10:52 PM


fine poetic as well as photo imagery !
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2015-12-30 11:25 PM


wow,  love your writing and snowy pictures...its beginning to look a lot like Christmas...james
DaysofView
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7 posted 2015-12-30 11:51 PM


That is pretty but I don't feel very lovey dovey when I'm cold. Nice poem too!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Margherita
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8 posted 2016-01-03 12:47 PM


Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for stopping by and commenting so kindly. I much enjoyed your replies.

MissMarti
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9 posted 2016-01-04 05:50 PM


Love this! As off yet we have no snow. Very unusual for NH.
jwesley
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10 posted 2016-01-04 11:12 PM


Wonderful! My friend . . .

j.

Ticklefingers
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Louisiana
11 posted 2016-01-05 12:12 PM


"Trees in their white dress" is stunning to imagine. It was once a reality for me Margherita, but a scene like this one in your image is likely to be viewed only in pictures now.

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

latearrival
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12 posted 2016-01-05 02:52 PM


Margherita, You put words together so beautifully.  That picture is a  perfection but you are the one that opens it up to all. Love to you, JO
Margherita
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13 posted 2016-01-06 03:29 PM


Thank you, Miss Marti, Jimmy, Danny and Martyjo, for your kind replies. I enjoyed your visit here.

Love and peace.
Margherita

BluesSerenade
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14 posted 2016-01-07 04:48 PM


The beauty of your poetry never fails and continues to inspire.

Just beautiful, you.

Margherita
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15 posted 2016-01-09 02:44 PM


Thank you so much for your highly appreciated visit and comment, dear Lori!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Marchmadness
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16 posted 2016-02-24 05:02 AM


So pretty.
        Ida

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