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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2016-01-03 06:48 PM


I have said what I have said,
I sleep peaceful in my bed.
I'm not as gifted to be sure,
Not as eloquent and pure.
I will leave these hallowed halls,
Wish everyone well, one and all.

The poem was about the killers of children.

©January 3, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2016 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
DaysofView
Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie
1 posted 2016-01-03 11:59 PM


Call me stupid Jerrypat2 but I don't know anything in your poem that says anything about child killers. I do like it though.

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2016-01-04 02:15 AM


Jerry  Jerry Jerry. come back. If someone
misread your poem it is okay.Your poems are great and many look for them. Your space is open please contine to fill it. jo

Cari
Member
Posts 411
Englnand
3 posted 2016-01-04 10:46 AM


Jerry.
When you state a firm political opinion, as in your last but one post and a previous post, you must be prepared to accept that others will state opinions that are counter to your own. That’s the very foundation of free speech.

No one here is making a personal attack on you, at the most their stating the other side of the same coin. But I agree with Ice, such discussion should be confined to the debating forum. The poetry forum is for poetry i.e. if the poem reflects on a highly emotive subject it should be judged on how it stands as a piece of poetry, not on the views it contains, that being said, a statement is just that, a statement and nothing more.

Sorry to hear you are leaving, there’s nothing I have read I feel could justify that but I accept your right to do so.

Take care.

Cari.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2016-01-04 12:51 PM


What she said!  Your reply is spot on Cari.
Free speech applies to everyone, therein lies
The foundation of a free world.

JP has left so many times it's kind of ridiculous.  Seriously!!  

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